Back when this page was originally slotted to run, I thought it seemed kind of odd- when Eve is first introduced it's made to seem that she's been hired to take out Stealth, however, as she points out here, our hero actually isn't her target. Back then, it seemed kind of odd (at least I thought so) because, as far as you the reader would know, there wasn't anyone else to be a target. Now that more of Terminus City's major players have been introduced, I think it works a bit better.
looks great, man. Seems like you forgot to mention something, though..*COUGH*CROSSOVER*COUGH**COUGH*.
Ignore that, lol.
And here I was about to come up with a witty retort 🙂 !